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A Night With Me

A boy with cute little blue eyes lived in a small town called “paper town”. Everyone used to call him as “Advent” because he was crazy in doing adventures. He always wanted to go somewhere to an unknown place on his own. But he always accompanied by someone. He was restricted by his mom’s ground rules.

One day, He received a mail from an advertisement company. He opened the mail and he found a tour package with a note inside the mail. The note was quoted as “CONGRATULATION, YOU WON OUR LOGO CONTEST.”

He just started to shout like he found a treasure. He showed it to everyone who came to him because of his shout. He couldn’t even keep his legs still. He took the mail upstairs to show his mom. She doesn’t even paid attention to him, without seeing the package she refused to send him anywhere far from home. He got upset and left crying to his room. He kept locked himself for the entire day. His father convinced his mother for the trip. And he asked her to invite him personally for dinner. She convinced him and came down with him to the table. While having dinner, her mom agreed to the trip with some terms and conditions like calling her thrice a day and to be careful with unknown ones.

He packed his dresses and a guitar along with it. With his parents blessing, he went off to train station. And mother of nature blessed him by pouring some drizzles upon him. He went to the station earlier that evening and he found out that his train was at 0.10 am. He spent his time by thinking about the route. As time goes on, the station was left alone with a few passengers along with him. He sat down in his platform and kept staring at the train track. He watched his watch and it was 00.00 am, still there’s no evidence of the train. When the time passes 00.00 am he felt something strange happening in the platform. The train trail and platform started to vibrate. He felt something going towards of him. He went to the corner of the platform to look closely. He was pulled back by a passenger and he warned him about platform deaths.

He was so happy to see the engine because it’s huge than the compartments. As soon as the train arrived, he took his bag and ran to his seat because he couldn’t wait anymore longer on that lonely platform. In a few moments the train set its course to his destination. He felt something strange inside him, when the train moved. Very soon everyone in that compartment went to sleep and he was the only one who keeps staring at everything. It was a 7 hours journey and he didn’t plan to sleep in that journey. He wanted to enjoy the whole journey of 312 kilo meters.

Slowly he walked towards the door to enjoy the silence of the nature. He wanted to play the musical notes of the wind which passes him. He went back to his place to took his guitar and came back to the doors. He opened the door and locked it. He sat down by resting his head on the door. And just played the musical notes which he heard. The chillness of the wind slowly drowned into him. His arm’s hair was kept on dance for the musical notes. While playing the musical notes of the wind, he saw the magical dust of the wind under a light. Thought he was happy but the silence didn’t want to leave him alone. Loneliness started to drown into him. He doesn’t know why, his eyes responded to his feelings. As the train moves, many thoughts ran into him. He kept his guitar beside to him and rested his head on the door. Though he closed his eyes, he didn’t control his tears. This time his tears went his heart.

“Why are you crying?” he heard a girl voice. When he opened his eyes, there was a girl in front of him. She had a white hair and cute little blue eyes like him. Her skin was as soft as the snow. She was the most beautiful and kindest, he ever met. Her face glittered like the stars from the sky. She wiped out his loneliness and worries with her voice. He looked himself within her eyes.

She asked again, “Why are you crying?”

“Suddenly, I felt alone in the whole world” he replied. She sat against him so closely. She took his hands within her hand and tried to convince him. He forgot everything while hearing her voice. His mind stopped and his heart started to listen to her. He felt very comfort with her. He went to her shoulders. She had his hand in her one hand and his head on her another hand. She kissed him in his forehead and said, “I’m here”.

After spending few hours together, she convinced to sleep. She accompanied him to his bed. She requested him to sleep for few hours before his destination arrives.

“Be with me ever”, he requested.

“I will”, she replied.

Before closing his eyes he asked, “What’s your name?”

“I’m you” she replied. She kissed him to sleep.

Next day morning, he woke up at his destination.

 

 

THANK YOU FOR READING J




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  1. Super da ..keep rocking ..

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  2. We travelled with you narration... it's awesome...keep rocking....u have a great future ♥️

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